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1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
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first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@Bag Mandela @miracle
Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
.
.
1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@Bag Mandela @miracle
@Bag Mandela
His drive is coming to a screeching halt. ur fates been sealed
One uppercut will send u in the airbag, n hopefully thru a windshield
yoyoo
We started Ransom Writers n they keep askin why, It's cuz I'mma jack this guy and his wife,
And you got to provide a-tourney when you give Mir-and-her rights
mir this was pretty standard, nice flip and a bit of a twist on the punch. will say this was more of a witty landing that a harsh sting. its serviceable but doesnt go straight for the kill
bag i like the angle youre going for. i notice u go for complex wordplays but u gotta be careful with overdoing it. this play is reliant on some iffy pronunciation so it just didnt land right for me. just too many concepts at once that took away from an angle with potential
mvgt - miracle
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Solid bar from Mir as usual. I liked it. The relative simplicity works well.
As for Bag’s bar, I’ve seen the a-tourney wordplay a couple of times before but this was a fresh take on it. The Miranda rights was highly original, and fire. Works fine in my accent.
Vote- Bag
im hung up on miracle using "hopefully". i dont know. for me its something about the soft nature of this word that takes away from the sting of the punch for me. So IMO it made miracles bare slick af but dampened the impact, which is a shame because it was well written for an airbag bar. bag the word play was more intricate but i think you pulled it off. haven't heard mir and her before.
v/bag
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Miracle - dope punch & Nameflip I felt like that was nicely executed
bags - Loved your choice of multis/flow, the wordplay was dope very creative but I just didn’t
Like how u finished it a tourney was fire Miranda rights awesome connection but it’s missing something IMO
Maybe more sting factor? Idk come off has Mariner mir and her maybe it your accent? Idk
Vote - Miracle but a cunt hair, the creativity on Bags was unmatched but miracle throw a good punch name flip
Creativity wins battles but good executed punches are tough to beat also very close to call here it’s more a of a preference.
Last edited by KnoXville.; Yesterday at 01:48 AM
Verseman Got banned for voting for himself. what a Whack Faggot.
Jack Swallows is whiter than Justin Timberlake dropping nigga bombs. [Smh]
This was a good battle and I’ve held off voting because I really wasn’t sure the Miranda rights works but is still a bit reachy for me via the medium of text. It didn’t work first time I read it with the cadence I read the rest of the bar in but when I sped it up worked. A tourney didn’t work for me. I liked the bar but not really sure it was clean enough when faced with a very clean and direct hit that miracle had. This battle was really close and I feel like Miranda right just didn’t come off as cleanly as needed against miracles direct and straight up style
V/mir
Last edited by Slayerr.; Today at 11:02 AM
v Mir bag had word play but no punch?
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