RD1: Unfukwitable vs. H Dot Verseman

[Wuxia]

Regular Battle
Verses due NO DUE DATES*
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES*

Must check-in 24/48 hours for NO DUE DATES to take effect
*be reasonable

10-lines MAX Regular Battle
16-lines MAX Contendership and Championship Battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@Unfukwitable
@H Dot Verseman

[Unfukwitable]

Check

[H Dot Verseman]

check- how about wednesday 11:59 est time? 10 lines good?

[H Dot Verseman]

I might walk with a limp, but watch me flip the table
In a fit of rage you'll see a hidden blade from within the cane killing 'Able
I'm a veteran of these here written texts
The site seems to be a little dry off the top...no wonder why everyone is picking Heads
I'm head and shoulders above and the blitzkriegs coming
Please believe I got dirt on you, and there's six feet of it
There's no two ways, I'm gifted at rap
While you've achieved nothing with your recent strikes like the Iranian missile attacks
Giving him dap why, I spit bolder....
I'm not merely winning, I'm beating the pants off you like strip poker

[Unfukwitable]

Ima kill you & flee the state.. Clips burstin you is troublesome ,
I never had to take a page out of your book to RIP Verse & do a coverup.
Sniper Rifle Killer gon be the caption with my face In the Article,
“Once Eye Zero-In On dot” & get Atom he’ll be nothing but particles.
Faggot you gon need a pacemaker when Fo’s spark,
Put full metal jackets to a crossdresser he’ll have a Chrome heart
Modified my new hammers APPLIED MATICS WITH A BEAM,
I can “Switch Locations for Ages” I made a TIME TRAVELING MACHINE!
Ima kill u in fashion U ain’t a Champ this lame needs help,
A Title!? pfft! Even Hermes regrets giving H get the belt!

[Jack Hallows]

yessssssssssssssssss!!!

just a preface, this was probably my most anticipated match cuz i’ve seen what both are capable of previously & niggas already know i have history with Verseman, but Unfukwitable was a favorite of mine entering the tourney as someone who is new to me.

that said, this battle did NOT disappoint. let’s go:

from the top, both starting punches were haymakers. Unfwit’s was clever but that Cane & Able line was straight Biblical. LOTB for me.

picking heads, dry top was a dope concept, but Unfwit’s set up leading into the atom wordplay was fireeee.

the next 3 bars were the decisive ones for me cuz at this point they were aaalmost even.

the dirt on you concept has been around but the way it was executed here was cool. probly my least favorite line. funny cuz i feel the same way about Unfwit’s bar here too. was kinda forced.

still kinda even, next lines are important.

then boom. current event bar vs another gun bar. the Iranian missile strike line was fucking fire & i’m pissed off cuz if i had used my original verse in my battle, i could’ve used mine 1st & now i can’t use it anymore lmao. fuck you Headless. Unfwit’s gun bar was fun due to the multi syllabic structure, which i love, but it didn’t hit hard. it seemed more of a general gun bar that could be used in a verse anywhere be it a battle or an open mic, so i wasn’t as impactful compared to it’s counter bar up top.

closer bars were funny cuz they both involved clothes. wonder if it was intentional or just ironic. either way, both were quotable and evenly matched blows. both made me laugh a bit.

in the end, Hdot was more consistent & had a varied topic pool as far as punch angles go. Unfwit’s reliance on gun bars was more of a hamper here for him, even though he has some wildly entertaining gun antics lol. the deciding factor for me was the opener, which started HDV off with a decisive lead, and solidified it with the 4th bar.

both came with guns loaded, so to speak, but at the end of the bout, only one had more direct hits scored & that’s why my vote goes to

Headless Verseman for the win.

Howl.