Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
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1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@miracle @Austin Flowers
Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES
.
.
1 bar(2lines) vs 1 bar(2lines)
You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.
first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@miracle @Austin Flowers
Check
Yeerroo
A loose screw to chose a victim and lose… a screw is missing… and just when you thought miracle was the man you swiped left on his wifes “married but he don’t have the tool to fix it”//
Last edited by Austin Flowers; Yesterday at 01:43 AM
Punches will bust ya tulips. leaving u pushing up daisies this fall
One hit sending flowers to a early grave ya mom can set’em up at ur funeral
Vote Austin Flowers-
I really liked the multis throughout and it was clever. Just worded better than Miracles which he had a decent punch name flip concept but didn't execute.
you are rhyming "fall" with funeral and its not even close for a simple single syllable rhyme scheme.
Don’t like the way Austin used screw twice in the same line, the concept of the punch was okay but didn’t really connect that hard I liked miracles concept and was a good flip but felt it lacked a bit of sting but still enough to take the W
V/mir
solid punches from both
austin ur layout is a bit confusing and it made it harder to communicate ur punch
the setup for the punch kinda fell off with the wordiness
mir it was a simple flip and but u executed it fairly cleanly
mvgt - mir
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