RD1: KnoXville vs. Jack Hallows

[Wuxia]

Regular Battle
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@KnoXville
[MENTION=269110]Jack Hallows/MENTION]

[Jack Hallows]

In… let’s go 24.

[KnoXville.]

10 sounds a lot better

[Jack Hallows]

maybe to a non-writing chump.

i’ll compromise with you & go 16. deal?

[Jack Hallows]

man fuck this bullshit. i hate cowards.

here…

ayo you live by the sword, you’ll get speared by unruly believers
this fag gets bent over pokes from the rear willingly, no Julius Caesar
i see u like knife bars, but to thrust thru u gotta be worthy
take my slice of advice & get sharper b4 i cut you outta the tourney
concealing murder takes true skill. & this dude’s Dr. Seuss ill
by the time cops come lookin for KnoX’s body it’s halfway to Who?ville
if they guessed why KnoXville had two prominent letters it’d be a safe bet
that he gets high on K & X then pays the debts by engaging in gay sex
& the rest of his name text? him w/ wifey as he’s begun to panic
like “NO, luV. I'LL End all of my stunts & antics!1!1”

[miracle]

@KnoXville. Drop ya ten

Free post all Cleaned up

[KnoXville.]

I Love Knifes,
.

.

I’m cracking his top. fuck dude I’ll drive thru & start Attacking His spot,
This isn’t a fast food chain when I tell you I’ll be leaving Jack in a box.
Don’t be Lying for the stage, When I get off port it’s drugs, cartels getting hired for the day,
When you get off the port it’s a bunch of faggots literally crying for a raise.
hide ya face. or im Lumpin that u turned bitch quick once I started Dumping Facts,
Even if he wasn’t ‘Exercising in the gym’ the entire Gang will still be Jumping Jack.
I said 10 & you pushed it I tried to save ya cap, you see how you got played with that?
I’ll quickly leave rusted blades all down Jacks Spine Now we can call him razorback.
Heard ya Bitch Swallows Mean, I’ll grab the burner & let these Hollows scream,
I don’t gotta bring blades on Christmas cuz like Art the Clown you’ll be terrified it’ll end hallowsEve.

[H Dot Verseman]

Holys hit who is this Knoxville guy?! He's been around a while just by this style. Gotta be an alias.

From the start all quotables- I didn't think he could start it better- that's a closer really up front. Razorback line was dope too.

Jack Hallow- I dig it- that opener is really good as well. Ender was pretty dope too-

This is a tough one.....

I have to vote mainly that first bar vs. Hallow's first bar- I thought both were great, but his was just a little better, cleaner....and each had good but not great closers with pretty even in the middle.


vote- Knoxville (eye on you bro)

[Virbius]

Sorry but Jack’s style here didn’t appeal to me. Picking random letters from words/names to flip seems like the worst kind of reach. It’d be funny if it was done as a parody kind of thing, but this didn’t seem like it was going in that direction. There were some alright lines earlier in his verse though.

This was maybe the best form I’ve seen from Knox, some solid name flips and whatnot. I liked it.

Vote- Knox