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Thread: One in Infinity

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    Undercover Boss Chree's Avatar
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    One in Infinity




    Lately there's this light forming inside these inner parts..
    Lit up like a synagogue, my silhouette on the ninth story.
    But really I'm, just feeling it now.
    Watching life revolve around me, four just a little while.
    thinking youre above this? I'll rip the ceiling down.
    Hit you with ceiling tiles, let it dawn on thee.
    Are you in or out? I've been killing clowns and their silly styles.
    I'll be here all "week", flip the bar drinks getting really strong (yeah) this is how we all think.
    I just let the art breathe.
    ...
    and then it really shines, yeah this is how you hard sync.
    Aint distracted by no soft speech
    On my millionth grind rails popping large kinks.
    I can put you on this game for a small fee.


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    Princess Jonny Knows Candy's Avatar
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    Re: One in Infinity

    love it dude and your signature dope
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    Re: One in Infinity

    I think these are great lyrics I posted a reply
    before
    magery and Creativity:

    "Light forming inside these inner parts" and "Lit up like a synagogue" create a vivid visual. The religious imagery is striking and memorable.
    "Ninth story" suggests a high level or status, reinforcing the speaker's elevated position.
    Thinking you're above this? I'll rip the ceiling down" and "Killing clowns and their silly styles" exude confidence and assert dominance, which is effective in a battle context.
    Areas for Improvement:
    "But really I'm, just feeling it now": This line seems to disrupt the flow slightly. It could be rephrased or connected better to the preceding and following lines to maintain momentum.
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