WK34: FAQ (4-6) vs Spree (11-7) (SPREE WINS)

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Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


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first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@Spree @FaQEyeReddit

[FaQEyeReddit]

I hope this is decent.


Is spree-well for da’ next bout? Cuz He’ll pass on, from this next shot, if I verse son, tecs out…
No sub, just body suspended in air after shooters get sent out..

[Spree]

Yessa

[Spree]

Put this pupil to the test, I’ll leave this student bodied when 9s ignite…
Give’em colon shots then aim high, light up everything -in my line’a cite

WHOA SUS…
THAT quote show you ain’t blast smoke… you a faggot, son
You went @Slay colon & busted, yet you’ve never grabbed a gun

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I’m giving this to spree. FAQ was a little clunky for me.. I need u to clean it up better so it delivers heavier.. it might just be my taste but I’m a short bar guy.. after a certain word count it gets choppy.. spree did enough here, smooth, alright hit at a quote. Def enough for the W.. VOTE SPREE

[Lady Poet]

Both fresh and clean
Spre punchline more fresh compare to FAQ
Vote-Spre

[Bag Mandela]

Faq was a little more creative here, I'm going on the assumption that it's a Lattrell Sprewell reference after googling it, basketball just isn't as popular in the UK but I got all the wordplay. The punch was OK, maybe having the name flip in the 2nd line would've added a bit of sting to it. It's the "body suspended in the air" part that doesn't quite click for me, it works in the basketball context but IRL when people get shot they're generally on the floor afterwards. The wordplay's good but you got to make it make sense I'm both contexts.

Spree's bar was alright deffo seen better from you though. Everything worked, made sense & was specifically for Faq so I got Spree edging this one. You were close Faq just work on those couple of things.

Vote Spree

[FaQEyeReddit]

Haha that was legit all the thoughts I had creating this bar.. I should have taken more time thanks all for the advice and votes.. congrats spree.. also yes it’s a basketball ref bags.. and yes the body suspended is supposed to be a 3iple but I didn’t word it right.. suspended as ejected from the game and not able to play, suspended as in the air going for a dunk, and suspended as it shot up and you flying through the air.. thanks to all for voting see you next week.

I also vote spree I liked that bar

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Spree wins