WK29: FaQ (1-4) vs LadyPoet (0-4) (FAQ WINS)

[miracle]

Regular Battle
Punches due NO DUE DATES
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES

Rebuttal Option

both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)

You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO

@FaQEyeReddit
@Lady Poet

[FaQEyeReddit]

I’m over thrilled against this trans woman, one shot's overkill...
This a bi week, I let it rain bows and arrows 'til every hole gets filled...

[Lady Poet]

Check

Punchlines land like a heavyweight figther
While your verses fall flat, like a cheap lithium ligther

[Unfukwitable]

Felt one had a couple more layers to their bar lady poet def doing better than last week so I don’t wanna be much of a critic but props to both.

V/FaQ

[Slayerr.]

I’ve gotta say much better from both this week. FAQ has kept it easy to read and a clear focus to the bar and lady poet actually had a cool flip. Lady’s potential was there with the concept but the execution isn’t right for me I’ve never been a fan of similies for a punchline as I think it puts a limit on creativity and generally softens the impact. More flips like this just harsher executions going forward and you’ll be there
V/faq

[Virbius]

Both on good form this week. Lady’s was a marked improvement, keep it up. FaQ’s was more digestible without sacrificing his signature style.

Vote- FaQ

[FaQEyeReddit]

Since that’s 3 before it’s closed I’d like to say great job this week lady.. I almost ns cuz of life issues but I’m glad I didn’t this was a fairly great battle and I’ve learned a lot as of late. Take care don’t give up lady you’re skilled

[Lady Poet]

Since that’s 3 before it’s closed I’d like to say great job this week lady.. I almost ns cuz of life issues but I’m glad I didn’t this was a fairly great battle and I’ve learned a lot as of late. Take care don’t give up lady you’re skilled

Thanks.. keep your head up!

[miracle]

FAQ WINS