Thanks for the honest in depth vote broski I just wanted to explain the bars for a little understanding on how or why I worded how I did against mechs..
So first I actually wrote to much because I was trying to come up with a decent amount of multi syllable rhythms but after editing and restructuring the final product was meant to convey man vs machine in a way where ai is trying to take over manual labor..
So when I used “pairing us” it’s meant like Wi-Fi or Bluetooth pairing.
Mek vs FaQeyereddit = mek and eyes/mechanize
Hardware, manual and mech connect are just all homophones nothing special but where I think I will lose everyone is the second half of the bar.
The hotspot like Mexico and Wi-Fi is loosely connected with how I worded it also the firewall and Mexican or mechs a can -junk- reference is hard to understand but I thought the feet or defeat under the table cleaned it up lol
Cuz under the table jobs usually are when you are not us citizens. So without explaining to much the bar is supposed to read like “ they tried using wireless tech with workers to mechanize jobs but when the systems go down ie hacking or malfunction it makes the job even more difficult. So hiring undocumented workers will continue to be a thing as well as under the table manual labor because it’s easy to hire and fire
Maybe if I wrote this it’s better understood?
"they paired us like Wi-Fi to make this mechanize, he’s hard-ware, Manual never see mek connect a line...
Even in a hotspot, he’s not wrecking eyes, with my fire wall, I’ll short circuit 'til mek's a can—under the table, that's where mechs get fired..."
I was also thinking “under the table is where meks does his best work” but I also felt in two lines I wouldn’t be able to build on that sexual innuendo. I suck at this but I promise I’m learning
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