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Rebuttal Option
both competitors must agree to it at time of check-in
format is A, B, B, A (A posts first, B drops next, B posts follow-up, A drops final bar)
You have 24hrs from when battle was set to agree on rebuttal battle
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first to 4 wins
3-0 is a KO
@Unfukwitable
@daveDILLY
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Ya bitch cant get horny cus u broke, it’s no moistness with-in,
Told her to leave Dave & bust—her ass til she enjoy sticks again!
here
good luck
i will write something soon as i get a chance
i buy my girl fancy shit - ur chick ain’t use 2 getting treated right & has 2 settle..
wen u copper something expensive, u be in a abando struggle 2 dismantle scrap metal
Hmmm ok fair vote is in-
I appreciate unfukwitables creativity in starting the scheme with the relationship personals..
The bar itself is fairly good it took me a 3rd read when I felt I missed something in the word play and sure enough I did..
Dave and busters has games but the games don’t have joysticks like Xbox so telling her to enjoy sticks again was clever..
Dave your bar was super complex in wordplay similar to what I do a lot.
The scheme of selling copper from bandos is pretty funny however I’m leaning to unfuvkwit with this one
FAQ - pronounced fack…
Eye or E.Y.E - divination (seek knowledge using computers)
Reddit- A web “sight” with frequent asked and answered questions.
it should read Fa, Q, I read it for kicks
Didn't care for these bars being along the same lines/concepts here..
Both were OK, seen a lot of copper variations before but this had a decent follow through - I give this to unfuck cuz the wp was more personal and flowed a tad better even those both connected
V/ un
Both good. At first I didn’t get Unfuk’s bar as I’d never heard of Dave & Busters (I don’t think we have those here in England) but thankfully FaQ explained it in his vote which was very helpful for an international audience. The two wordplay elements were nicely interconnected, creative and cleanly executed. IMO Unfuk edged this one.
Vote- Unfukwitable
Dave not at his best here, maybe short on time or burnout from LLL but it just wasn't there this time.
Fukwit, as with Virb I had no idea what the fuck you were talking about since I live in England but after the aforementioned explanation you did enough to win.
Vote Fukwit
V/un
In’s bar was harsher so I’ll edge it to him over the comedic bar. Dave’s bar was funny but it didn’t read through as clean as his opponents bar.
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