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10-14 lines
Due 12 days
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@daveDILLY due friday
I’ll def have something up this weekend
We can line a battle up for everyday this week… ur lines r the worse
w/ these bars I’ll beat dilly dally while you just fuck around writing a verse
U beating me? Homie you trippin.. in this race to success he’s taking a whipping
Compete against me n he’ll bale out faster than a farmer with modern day equipment
I’m known to destroy the pussy! Power fuck ya bitch out of that cute outfit
My pacemaker explode, you won’t have the HEART to call her out on it
Block, kick or scream.. cuz in this fist fight I’m throwing a lot
And the thing with Davis…I’ll drop this mother fucker like a Garcia body shot
U probably a homo ain’t ya? Type to get a dudes wiener and blow
I would bet that there is more wood going thru D then a archers bow
Quote:
Originally Posted by Miracle last round
i can do this shit all day - & leave u sad with the blues..Quote:
Originally Posted by Lay Doubt. vs. Resin MIC in 2019
but don’t worry ill keep it briefcase you wanna look up anymore of LD’s lines 2 use
the shit u text is hacky & mild - you write with a clowns wit..
its weird u got a thirst 2 win & cant quench it with ur watered down shit
the women you bang are grotesque - most look like guys..
i don’t even wanna mention Mirex, but hope he ingests that & dies
this fat bastards lucky to be alive - doctors dont no where 2 start..
you’ll lose this and be so salty ur blood pressure will finally shut down ur heart
hope i don’t get disqualified cuz i don’t follow rules u geek..
theres no way i can match your lines, i don’t know how 2write a verse that weak
Ah man, this was hard to call. I thought Mir’s closer with the D / archer’s bow was great. I love that kind of shit, it’s different and super creative. Dave’s opener with the briefcase was also phenomenal. It’s more about the execution than the angle per se, seems perfectly feasible that Mir and LD would’ve both come up with the same wordplay independently so I’m not buying that Mir bit it. The execution with Dave’s mocking reuse of the contentious ‘briefcase’ phrase was pretty slick though, it made me laugh.
I’m tempted to give it to Mir for the bow line, but I feel like Dave was more consistent and all things considered I gotta go with him for this one. Great battle both, very entertaining.
Vote- Dave
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This battle is a straight up draw, I honestly thought the same person wrote both verses.
In fact that may be the case and this may be a test.
Both of you only had 1 good bar that felt like it took real work.
i can do this shit all day - & leave u sad with the blues..
but don’t worry ill keep it briefcase you wanna look up anymore of LD’s lines 2 use
U beating me? Homie you trippin.. in this race to success he’s taking a whipping
Compete against me n he’ll bale out faster than a farmer with modern day equipment
I could of just said nothing but in all honesty, I feel you both could of done alot better.
-DRAW
Both decent, if I need to do a massive breakdown @ me & I will tomorrow. Gave it Dave, had a natural flow & enjoyed his verse more although miracle was on it too. Props both.
Vote Dave
Block, kick or scream.. cuz in this fist fight I’m throwing a lot
And the thing with Davis…I’ll drop this mother fucker like a Garcia body shot
U probably a homo ain’t ya? Type to get a dudes wiener and blow
I would bet that there is more wood going thru D then a
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i can do this shit all day - & leave u sad with the blues..
but don’t worry ill keep it briefcase you wanna look up anymore of LD’s lines 2 use
the shit u text is hacky & mild - you write with a clowns wit..
its weird u got a thirst 2 win & cant quench it with ur watered down shit
This is pretty close but miracles verse annoyed me coz there was concepts that could’ve been sort of dope but just didn’t work like dilly dally and the pacemaker line should’ve been better, dilly’s verse was a bit more consistent and overall a higher standard, after a re read I don’t think this is as close as I first though I think dilly actually takes this pretty handily. I think quench your thirst is LOTB and I think bar for bar his is harder
V/dilly
Tough battle to call. Really close but have dave barely edging it out... mir had a couple execution/wording flaws to me..
Also that lay wp is reeeeeaaaaallllyyyy close bud.. lol
You've been dropping some good ones lately I don't want to be thinking you're ripping them from the past just sayin!
V dave